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      *老师,您好:  
      这个暑假,我在网上找到一个绿色作文网,叫“**作文网”。它是**省教育局办的。网站的特点就是师生互动,各叙己见。只要你把作文投上去,大家都可以帮你点评打分,你也可以帮别人点评,就在这热热闹闹的环境中,使我收获不少,也爱上了作文。  
      而且,我觉得在这个网站,有许许多多来自全国各地的优秀中小学生,他们的作文水平都很高,又是一个非常谦虚热情的群体。为什么在这儿,同学们都那么热爱作文呢?更可贵的是,他们的作文都写的非常自信,就像在玩儿似的。不像在我们班里,有大多数同学都害怕写作文。就算被逼而写出来了,也只是几句千篇一律的话,构思不新,语句不新,题材不新,几乎停留在二、三年级的写活水平上。这怎么是好呢?  
      我觉得学生只靠老师平时布置的课堂作文是不够的,写作文是靠博览群书、细察生活、积累素材的,但更重要的还是要我们多写多练,特别是要培养同学们对写作文有兴趣,要让同学们自己主动想去写,让同学们有感而发,这样才能提高作文水平。所以,我想提个建议,是不是我们班也可以成立一个作文兴趣小组,比方说“绿太阳文学社”之类的。  
       
      但是,我是个性格内向的女孩,胆子小,组织能力差。所以希望曾老师能够帮助我成立这个小组,让爱写作的同学们都来参加,利用课余时间进行互相交流、互相学习、互相帮助、互相促进,使大家的作文水平有所提高。然后让同学们把作文投到小荷网上去,让同学们结识更多的作文爱好者。通过互相交流,互相学习,从而提高我们班的作文水平。  
      *老师,不知道我的建议是不是切合实际,请老师决定。  
       
      你的学生:***
      2007年9月20日  
       
       

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      给老师的建议书
      亲爱的老师:
      在我们小学即将毕业之际,为了让后面的弟弟,妹妹能学得更好,我想老师您提出几点建议:
      一、希望能给同学们更多属于自己的空间去学习。像上课时,让同学们自己学习的时间多一些;放学时,坐也不要布置得过多,多布置让同学们自己阅读的作业,让同学们更好的发挥。
      二、在每期考完试后,希望能不公布考试结果让没考好的同学报纸“面子”使他们对学习有自信心,不沮丧。况且,一次分数的高低,也不能说明一切。
      我再次希望,老师能接受我的建议。

      五年级学生
      2006年6月

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      尊敬的各位校领导:我即将毕业,离开自己的母校,步入中学的殿堂。四年前,刚从本部来到天华时,我对毕业之事满不在乎,觉得还很遥远。事过境迁,我马上就要离开我的母校了,难免有些不舍。在离开前,我仍想为母校的发展尽我最后的一份力。每年夏天,我们最关注的就是学习和饮水问题。天气炎热,而没有水喝,实在难受。其实,饮水问题的原因在于人为。炎热时,很多同学直接打开龙头喝水,不用水瓶接。造成了浪费的水明显比真正被引用的水多几倍的情况。生命的源泉流失,不免让我有些伤感。浪费水的同学全部都报着图方便和认为水不用他们出钱,浪费就浪费的心理。如果要纠正这种情况,不是一朝一夕的事。对于水的匮乏,相信各位校领导比我清楚多了。为此,我想了个解决的方法,但治标不治本,关键在于对学生的教育。现在,许多大学里使用水电都要刷卡,这样,学生就会尽量节约,因为是出自己的钱,所以学生的态度就会有三百六十读大转弯。我建议学生进行效仿。在饮水处使用这种设备,这样,学生们就不能直接引用了,更何谈成倍的浪费?虽然成本比较高,但是,水真实的价值是无限的,节约水是种美德。学校也不必担心家长的反应。学生喝再多的水,也只要几元钱,家长不会为了很少的钱而反对,相反会为学校这种保护水资源的做法拍手称快。我即将离开母校了,最后向母校提此建议,若有益,望能采纳。此致 尊敬的校长:  您好!  我是本校一位普普通通的少先队员.我在校园里已经生活五年多了,对学校基本上比较满意.但是我感到学校还存在着一些美中不足的地方.在这儿我给您提出三条建议.  一 我们学校的电脑室已经多年没有用了!我们的学校是县级的实验小学,教学质量已经很好了.但是我还是想让学校开展电脑课,毕竟现在是21世纪,信息是最重要的.因此我建议学校再购置一些电脑来弥补不足;  二 我们学校操场的面积很大,但是供我们娱乐的器械太少了.因此我建议学校再购置一些健身器材以便让我们的身体更加强壮.  三 我们学校厕所的便沟里很不干净,虽然我们厕所里有冲水装置但还是不行,这样给人的感觉会很不卫生.因此我建议学校应在安装一些冲水装置以便让我们的厕所更加卫生.  尊敬的校长,如果您觉得我的建议有什么不妥请您指出.如果觉得合理希望您能采纳!敬爱的校长:   您好!    我离小学毕业不远了,小学中的生活那么的有趣,又是那么的难忘。在我快毕业之前,想提这两个小小的建议,希望学校采纳:1、能为学生们上有关安全的一节课,增强学生的安全意识。2、加强对高年级学生有关看课外书的正确引导。    在一次上学的途中,我看见马路上的一辆大客车正在行驶,一位我们中心小学的学生为了能快点地过到对面,就离大客车大约3米距离冲过了马路,那辆大客车因为行驶较快,看见有路人就紧急刹车,那位小学生刚才的做法是很危险的,如果那位小学生走慢了,客车司机没看见那位小学生,那位小学生的后果可能会头破血流,更严重的可能会终身残废。安全,不单只是交通安全,还有用火安全,人身安全等等,近年来,大沥发生过许多血的教训,这些教训是极为深刻的,作为一位小学生,应该意识到安全的重要性,而作为一间学校,更加应该教育学生,让学生的安全意识逐步提高。    在我们身边,我经常可以看到我们班的同学拿着什么《幻城》、《帅小子传奇》、《我为歌狂》……不但是女同学,男同学也有看一些暴力的武打片,一些游戏的攻击方法等等,我觉得这些书都是属于成熟的书籍,对我们这个年龄的阶段还不合适,我们应该看一些《十万个为什么》、《101个科学家》……这些才合适我们这个年龄阶段的学生看。如果我们都去看一些不健康的或不宜身心的书,那就会害了学生。对于那些把人引入歧途的书,我们一定要提高警惕!菲尔丁曾经说过:“不好的书,像不好的朋友一样,可能会把你害了。”的确,我们应该读一本好书,叫个好朋友,它将把你带进书的殿堂!希望学校能教育一下看这类书的同学,否则,这些同学就会越陷越深。   以上是我提的两个意见,如果觉得好的话就希望学校能够采用。  祝  工作顺利!  

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      回复:

      楼上的不符合实际 那家里没有电脑的同学不就没办法了吗
      这儿有一篇 我写的
      敬爱的罗老师:
      您好!
      现在已经是九点了,老师,您也该休息了吧,请原谅打扰一下,听听我的心声吧!
      您一开始教我们的时候,我们还不怎么习惯,慢慢地,我们的关系已经不错了,成绩,纪律渐渐地也都更好了,这当然也要归功于您,若不是您用心良苦,想方设法,也许我们就终就不见天日,长期处在阴暗的角落里。
      老师,您发觉了没有,80分的很多,我想,大概就是以下几点导致的:
      (1)作文扣分严重。
      (2)阅读,课外知识懂得太少,不理解意思。
      (3)字不整洁,乱。
      为了让我们六(4)班的明天更加美好,我提出以下几点:
      (1)组成”三帮一“学习不好的和三名学习好的组成一队,考完后,看看哪队最优秀,评奖。
      (2)积极鼓励有电脑的人查阅大量资料,并加以整理,叫每人买一本专门抄资料的本子,背诵。
      (3)练习多一点。
      (4)专门买一本字帖,每天练一张,不撕,交上审阅,不过关者重写,或罚抄。
      (5)鼓励大家多多写作,举行一次作文比赛。
      哦,不早了,老师,您也该休息了,我相信,六(4)班是不难教的,您的努力没有白费,我在这谢谢您的培养!
      此致
      敬礼!
      您的学生陈月静
      2009年3月18日

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      给老师的建议书 亲爱的老师: 在我们小学即将毕业之际,为了让后面的弟弟,妹妹能学得更好,我想老师您提出几点建议: 一、希望能给同学们更多属于自己的空间去学习。像上课时,让同学们自己学习的时间多一些;放学时,坐也不要布置得过多,多布...

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      您好,学,在星期与老师的相处内,却要对你建议,实在有些冒犯,但我却不先您提议,还要在间教室一起学习和生活1年左右。 老师,当我考上真理中学的,我就经常对新学校,新老师、同学的憧憬中。兴真理中学老师教学的和,对新的科目产生的兴趣,...

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      老师 你终于管不到我了

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      你写的作文有点跑题,记住,有点。希望你继续努力,你写的作文的语言还是不错的,逻辑也很可以,你只要改掉跑题这个毛病就行了!(和我同样的毛病)

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      感谢老师 在我的记忆里面,有许许多多我要感谢的人。我要感谢我的妈妈,感谢她给予了我宝贵的生命;我要感谢我的爸爸,感谢他给予了我非常大的快乐;我要感谢我的同学,感谢他们给予了我渴望的鼓励;我要感谢我的外婆和外公,感谢他们给予了我很...

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      毕业考试快要到了,同学们都进入了紧张的复习,但是我班还是有一种不好的现象。如,黑板总是等老师进入教室时再擦,下课铃响了就跑出去玩,到上课铃响时再去上厕所,浪费宝贵的学习时间;上体育课或音乐课上,下楼时,用力踩踏楼梯,大声喧哗,...

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      我爱你老师

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      您好! 我是六年级二班的小斌。我在母校已经上了快六年学了,这里给我留下了十分美好的印象。我非常热爱我的母校,是母校把我从一个什么也不懂的小孩,即将培养成一个合格的小学毕业生。我非常感激我的老师和同学,是他们给了我无私的帮助和关怀...

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      就写老师在同学“背后”的生活呀, 不在同学面前,他是怎么过的,在同学面前他又是什么一个人

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      *老师,您好: 这个暑假,我在网上找到一个绿色作文网,叫“**作文网”。它是**省教育局办的。网站的特点就是师生互动,各叙己见。只要你把作文投上去,大家都可以帮你点评打分,你也可以帮别人点评,就在这热热闹闹的环境中,使我收获不少,也爱...

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